I feel a whole lot better now that I’m almost completely done with my paper. It takes a lot of stress off knowing that I’m almost completely done with it. All I have left to do is fix a few things to make it even better. Sometimes it was frustrating getting through it all, but now that it’s done, it doesn’t seem like it was so bad.

Now that the paper is almost done, my work load in all classes seems to be a little better because I don’t have a fifteen page research paper hanging over my head, still left to be done. I have enough stress in all of my other classes, I don’t need to add that to list of things to do anymore. That makes everything a lot easier.

Now that I have this done, I have a lot more time for everything else. I feel like I can focus more on my other classes and that makes me a very happy person indeed.

I know the number one thing I need to improve on in my paper is my conclusion. It needs to be a little bit stronger in my opinion. It could be a little longer in my opinion. And maybe a little more conclusive?

I also need to work on the structure in the interview section. I could include more information that I got from the interviews of the mother and the teachers.

I know I also need to work on my word choice. I think there were a few words or phrases I used too many times. I should vary my choices more and be a little more creative.